I'd love some feedback on my new doodle !!!
I am aware that the music is off and that it's not quite centred. i'm working on that :)
But anything else ???
ps sorry about the link I had trouble posting it on the blog :(
We now have a second blog just for project 3! Yeah! All your process will be scanned (if necessary) + posted here for review. Remember: an attempted animated/stop motion/interactive doodle with fair results will earn you the same mark as an excellent static (and linked) doodle. The reason I am encouraging this is because increasingly, employers will prefer (or demand) people with experience using animation and interactivity. You will probably have to start sometime, why not now?
Very cute! Though I think the 'e' appears quite abruptly and then it loops too soon after. I think if you had all the letters come in and then just stay as is instead of looping it might be better. You could even let the music continue after the letters are in place and it would seem less..choppy?
ReplyDeleteNice work though! Hope this helps.